[Report This]Date: February 08 2023 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Something A Little More Deliberate
Very well written, I thoroughly enjoy this story~ Of course I love the first chapter, the back-and-forth is especially well done there, and the attention to detail too - I love pointing out her nails accentuate her thong. Insert smug anime face. Plus the ass content is just well written all around~ Maybe I should make someone kiss mine a hundred times next...
I also really like the action and teasing in the third chapter, and seeing some different sides of her makes her feel like a more fleshed out character. Plus who doesn't love a swamp in a boot?
The second chapter is well done, and interesting to see a full other side to the vile one, but Blaire's perspective is definitely a bit cloyingly sweet for my tastes, so I think whether I like that chapter or not depends on how you use her inevitable impression whiplash for maximal effect. Insert smug anime face. Anyway, I can see some possibilities, like having the poor girl torn between liking the orders and attention and being disgusted by the situations, or so on... Though I hope she doesn't become a total willing simp who likes it all because that's sooooo boring, am I right? If I had a coin for every time 2/3 of the way through a story the unwilling tiny goes full streamer simp and enjoying it I'd have... a lot more yen. But hey, that's just my perspective. Insert very smug anime face.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, mate! Really means a lot coming from you!
Yeah, that first chapter wasn't even originally planned but just seemed like the perfect way to introduce Aimée right out of the gate. Same goes for injecting a bit of ass content, just cause I know feet will be the main focus through much of the story, so it's good to find a balance. And knowing you, having a tiny pecking at your ass is never a 'maybe'.
That's kinda my main goal overall to be perfectly honest. Like sure, yeah, hitting all the fetish and kink notes, but I also want Aimée and Blaire to resonate as real people, rather than just smut caricatures. If that makes sense? Plus, if you love swamp boots, then Aimée's got plenty more where that came from lol.
I won't say much about Blaire for now, nor where her character arc might be going, but I don't think you'll be disappointed. As for how she's going to react if and when she sees what Aimée's really capable of... well, suppose we'll just have to wait and see, won't we? Though, if anyone's gonna end up being an unabashed simp, then that won't be her.
Always appreciate your perspective, mate! And I'm sure we can get you more yen one way or another.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Something A Little More Deliberate
Thanks for another chapter!
With Espadrille wedges, a lot of the fashion material is either summer show, indoor or office, or Mediterranean setting. Aimée could (depending on just how small she can make people, or even objects if she can) smuggle some people on a vacation, play the ancient greek goddess on a Mediterranean beach. Or as new house shoes.
Theres even DIY kids for those heels, so she could make smuggling/storage specific shoes for herself. Even enlisting the aid of a tiny to make the work even higher quality.
Besides all the other kind of wedges out there. Even recently found the Moab Wedge Boot Merrell has, that could be if she ever goes hiking, plus all the training shed need to get up to that point, so wedges for months even with exercise. Should get stinky too since that seems to be a major thing.
Even really terrible thing of leaving a bunch of people out in some part of some woods, or when ‘disposing’ of someone, and then coming back to crush the settlement/camp they made in the intervening time or hunting them.
Author's Response:
No worries at all, mate! And thanks for another review!
I can certainly say your knowledge of wedges far surpasses my own, so I'll have to try and makes some notes on the ideas you're throwing around there. I'm sure there'll be the right scenario to draw something from eventually!
And I wouldn't worry - when it comes to doing terrible things to tiny people or making her feet reek, Aimée's certainly more than capable of that. Which I'm sure will only become clearer as the story progresses...