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Reviewer: TiniestofSparks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

 

 

Hey I just wanted to reassure you that this chapter was the hottest yet. Bellybutton exploration and tummy pudge are two themes that are in short supply in this genre, and you've effectively set the bar damn high.

 

This was my favorite chapter, the sounds of digestion, and that description of a building sized movement, really made for some steamy visuals.

 

Hope you continue!

 

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