[Report This]Date: August 14 2023 8:40 AM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
Really enjoyed the story!
That last twist at the end has me hoping you'll do an after-story like One Year Lease to see how they're getting on with life with this new development but if this is where you decide to end the story that's okay too, I look forward to seeing what you'll write next.
Author's Response:
Thank you! This is the end of Jess and Drew's story (at least as the main characters); I wanted to leave it open-ended because, to me at least, that makes for a happier and more satisfying ending than something more definitive in a slice of life story like this. I do have plans for a sequel series, but I'm not going to start writing it until next year at the earliest. I want to get a few different series under my belt first before I do any sort of continuations.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2023 11:52 AM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
It really is a pleasure to read. Thank you for keeping this up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll keep 'em coming until it's over.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2023 10:11 PM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
I'm intrigued by this one going on the first chapter. I like the casual worldbuilding slipped into conversations, and I love tiny guy big girl dating stories as a general rule. I also like the friends providing some commentary on both sides, it makes the whole thing feel more real.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2023 1:14 PM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
Loved reading the story, however I think a little bit more description here and there would do rather nicely.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I agree I could do better with describing things more. I'm always afraid of getting too wordy or ruining the pacing that I end up going too hard in the other direction. I'll keep this in mind and try to improve for future chapters.
Date: April 09 2023 7:30 PM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
Really like this story. Cant wait to see more. I like the idea of Sasha being so against it too. Adds more drama to it. What would she do to her friends tiny boyfriend, or any tiny, that she got her hands on?
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. A lot of this story's conflicts are going to revolve around how others respond to their relationship and how the characters develop through these interactions.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2023 1:56 AM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
I really enjoyed this and look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. More is on the way.