At first, I didn’t read your username before clicking the story. After reading the chapter notes at the end and finally looking at your name, I was stunned after all these years you’re back! Happy to see you and with a new story to boot! Loved your “Close” story and was liking your Retreat story as well (will you continue now that you’re back?). 

As for your new story, I’m liking the intro and your new characters. Looks like you still have your touch after all of these years :)

Can’t wait to see more!