Fantastic dialogue and world building. Great perspective from Judy, handled very delicately. It will be interesting to see Mary take more responsibility in her actions. She’s now responsible for Judy and Lester’s happiness. Judy has been shown to have a power kink. Will Mary provide the same role her father did, dominating tinys and minis for her mom? And how does Lester fit in? Will anyone at school date him knowing what happened to Evelyn? Will Mary force some girl to be his new girlfriend / sex slave as an apology? Is that something he would even enjoy, or be encouraged to enjoy?

Keep it up! One of the best stories on here.

This is exactly the kind of fucked up stuff I come to this website to read.

Would like to see more of Lester. I hope he gets an apology. Mary’s violence up to this point is mostly “justifiable” from her point of view, but I think even she knows that not standing up isn’t a good enough reason.

The comparisons with Victoria were great. I also loved the imagery of Mary’s abs being the only separation from her stomach. I hope that’s revisited after she swallows someone, with someone outside her listening in.

I love the psychological intimidation from Mary. It would be cool to see her ordering Tainys or Minis to hurt or fuck each other. Like force Victoria to let Fred dominate her.

Mary is a wonderful character! The relationship with Judy is fascinating. Keep up the good work!