Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 7:58 PM Title: Intimacy of two

Great chapter! I loved how Mary hyped herself up, and how quickly it wavered when she thought Victor was scared. I’m not a fan of animal stuff but the scene was well-written.

Happy to see the return of flashbacks! You do a good job of integrating them into the story. I would love to see more flashbacks of a younger Mary testing her power and wiping out some families along the way.

Next chapter sounds exciting!