Well well well, I've been wanting to see more of Tyrael for awhile. It's almost as if you made this out of sheer peer pressure from someone like myself...

But of course not, that would be quite dubious, would it not? As dubious as Vearnay no doubt.

I could list several paragraphs about the strength of the smut Tyrael and her apprentices subjected "poor" Arthur too, but you've heard it all. From her casual subjugation of Arthur to her lilac-scented pits, to then dropping him in her underwear, to Elewyn's boot punishment, and finally, Tyrael literally bringing the twin Elven moons down. Perhaps the best scenes you've written in regards to that, and not just because it ticked off some arbitrary boxes, but because how you transitioned into them, how you depicted them, and even how some of it ties into the overarching plot.

Of course, no matter how good the smut is, your greatest strength has always been characterization (which exists in a feedback loop for the quality of the smut). The way you introduced Tyrael's, let's just keep it at, "motivation", was probably one of the smoothest, yet most profound transitions I've seen. It really gives depth to her character, although she was pretty well established in "The Elf is Innocent".

My only complaint is that the Viper constellation didn't induce eternal trauma on both of them, and that Star Cath is one of the most petty and temperamental stars I've ever seen in my life. Those Eldritch star systems are crazy, I certainly don't want to be associated with them.