[Report This]Date: December 22 2023 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great to see the continuation of this story. Loni being reduced down to Witch Trish's poop was wonderful to read, especially Loni seeing it happen.
One has to wonder why the bones were not digested, as they do contain the nutrient rich morrow. Is it because Loni is going to be reintroduced to his own skeleton; perhaps as a living skeleton squirming about in Witch Trish's pussy as a living dildo?
There are a few, very few grammatical errors, such as "she" in place of "him", or "her" rather than "the"; but nothing to distracting that it takes away from your incredible story. Perhaps a proofread or two a few hours after you write a chapter to make sure you are writing what you are trying to convey might be in order. Heck, I make this mistake myself quite often,
Which ever way this story goes, I'm glad it's back and even more intriguing and enticing as ever.
Keep up the fantastic work.