[Report This]Date: April 17 2024 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gym
A really really fun gentle unaware story with a lot of creative size interaction. I could understand the pain in describing various different-sized characters in one story, but somehow you could describe it well enough for me to get it. Really like Ayla's character that is gentle yet could be dangerous if anyone pissed her off.
Also, the way you describe a situation in detail based on someone's perspective is one thing I must commend. Couldn't wait for what's next.
Author's Response:
Hello, thanks a lot for your kind words and the 5 stars!
Yeah, I felt that the multisized world could lead to an interesting setup, and I've tried to put a lot of thought into the points of view of the different characters and how they would interact with one another
I apologize if this one had fallen a bit behind in new uploads, cause I was relatively busy until last week, and I was also trying to finish the first chapters of two other stories I wanted to publish. Now that I finally sat down to it, the next chapter is coming along well, so it will be published soon-ish.
Thanks again, feel free to check out my other work!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2024 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gym
I thoroughly enjoy this cute and cozy story so far. The premise of different-sized humanoid creatures figuring out how to coexist in the same world... is a perfect world-building excuse for some lovely multi-size. I appreciate the moments where attention is placed on the size difference of the different characters interacting besides just giving us "This person is this tall and this person is this tall" The main character is kind and adorable in all the right ways... Despite being an absolutely massive dragon. My favorite moment that stuck with me was the cat doctor simply being too large and awkward in the room meant for a mouse. That wonderfully silly scene really shines the charm of this fun tail. Thank you for sharing with us ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words, multisize has always been a favorite of mine, I'm happy that you guys are enjoying those elements, there will be more of those in chapters to come.
As a silly, goofy person, I love putting those moments of silly goofiness here and there, and i think that here they can really sell the struggle that the people of Reidsville face daily in interacting with other sizes.
Thanks again for stopping by, hope you'll like what's to come!
[Report This]Date: December 02 2023 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 - First Meeting
Another great chapter!
You're doing a good job describing all the different sizes on display. I love the details like how Ayla's breath nearly blowed Ryan away and how her tears sounded like rain to the clinic staff. Also, Ayla navigating the tiny parking lot and crushing the car beneath her knee was pretty fun. The characters continue to be very likeable, everyone's reactions in line with what'd I'd expect from them.
If I'm to offer one criticism: there's quite a few instances of characters being referred to with the wrong pronouns, whether it's referring to the female characters as "he" or Ryan as "she" or either of them as "it." Just something to keep an eye on.
Otherwise, definitely worth the wait. I was a bit surprised how easy it was for me to jump back into this world after so much time away, but I think your writing left enough of an impact that I didn't even need to catch myself up, and then this chapter just keeps the good times rolling. Great work!
Date: October 24 2023 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gym
This is a really good story, i quite enjoyed it. It nice to see Ryan getting medical help but I hope that's not that last Ayla has seen of him, if she is even aware of him next time.
I hope you don't mind me asking but what kind of Giantess content are you planing on adding to the story, and I hope its more unaware stuff though not with feet this time.
Author's Response:
Hello, thanks for your review!
Don't worry, they will see each other again, they are the main characters after all. Besides, she seems to already care about him, and he needs to deal with the mob in some way.
About the content, I will mostly follow the tags, so breasts, insertion and feet, maybe add in some more if they become relevant (like, I would love to put some stockings/legwear play) and it will be aware for the most part (i find it a bit easier to write), although Who knows. Maybe he will fall into her bra at some point...
[Report This]Date: July 28 2023 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Coming Home
Good story so far. I like the multiple tiers of sizes and the massive difference in scale between the main leads. The fact that everyone's size correlates to their animal's size is a cool way of implementing size differences, and I'm curious about more of the worldbuilding stuff. I also like how mythical creatures are included, and it's not just normal animals. Characters are great (Ayla especially), and the plot's intriguing. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate these comments, even more so when they come from an author whose stories I really like.
I will see if I'm able to pulish a size tier chart when the next chapter is ready
There are lots of wordbuilding ideas and prompts that I've yet to clearly set and define myself, but the basic concept is that following a series of events, the various sentient species have evolved from animals and other creatures, and have maintained many of their progenitors' characteristics, including their size. Harpies, Sphinxes, and other mythical creatures (many are of Mediterranean inspiration, like in my TTRPG setting) are ancestral beings that precede that "evolution", while dragons have been influenced by it towards a more humanoid form.
I have some plans on other stories set in this world, including one that i've already started set a few centuries before this one, maybe i will explain these events in detail there.
I'm glad you like Ayla, I feel she has a lot of potential, with her being so shy and insecure, while she's one of the biggest creatures around.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2023 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gym
I like were this is going, really a big fan of unlikely romance in giantess. The world building of different sized races and female harpies larger than male was cool. Just personally I like more scent, smell descriptions especially around feet/ in shoe. Maybe dragons don't sweat tho lol.
Date: July 01 2023 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gym
Great start, looking forward to more! Loving the characters, the size difference and the setting. Thank you for your work! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, i really appreciate your words!
Yep, i like how the two MC are coming out, expecially Ayla.
And yes, that size difference opens up a lot of possibilities, stay tuned for it ;)
[Report This]Date: June 30 2023 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Gym
Great start so far!
I personally like when a giantess is a mix of being kind and gentle to people she likes and a bit ruthless and cruel to people she doesn't.
Not sure how hardcore Ayla will be in this story when pissed off, but I'll read regardless.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, glad you like it!
Yeah, Ayla is kind and sweet, and mostly a pushover, but still, you don't wanna see her pissed off, especially if you are one of the smaller guys. After all, she is the descendant of creatures that used to consider themselves above all other races, and generally do whatever they wanted to the smaller people, so her instincts are there.
Still, I don't know how extreme the violent scenes will be in this story.
I plan to have events in the story that make her gradually overcome her meekness, and learn to stand her ground and use her imposing size to protect the people she cares about,
Thanks again for your review, it means a lot <3