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Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2023 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

I really love the mind games. What Garrick did was pretty interesting and I like how Liza subtly tries to make them become more obedient by them trying to get the best out of their time there and also contrasting herself with some of the women she lets use them.


This is a really fun story. Really curious to see what happens next tho. I'd imagine Garrick is gonna get punished badly and maybe Martin too? Maybe Martin gets pissed at him. Hopefully at least one of them makes it out.



Author's Response:

The mind games aspect of this story wasn't planned, it just naturally panned out that way, so I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it!

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