[Report This]Date: November 06 2023 9:00 AM Title: An introduction
Fantastic writing, social commentary (some ideas I'd even had, I was surprised to see here, like the website in your story!).
Adore the dynamic between Laura and Taylor, and the 'civil' relationship she maintains with him that masks her underlying view of him as her property. As far as I'm concerned, Laura deserves whatever she wants! Maybe I'm a bit biased though, big fan of the ass-play in this series!
I DO wonder if she'll ever misplace him, or lend him to someone?
That could certainly make for an interesting subplot 👀
Author's Response:
Got some ideas, certainly Laura has friends who are interested to know why she's been so peppy lately.
And yeah, I like the website too, could be a cool concept for some one-shots set in this universe, from the perspective of other poor shrunken folk and their match-ups.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2023 4:33 PM Title: An introduction
I give you props for this story. Centering the woman's needs really makes this genre rock. Also, I think it make sense that with a size reversal, younger men would be drawn to the size, scope, curviness, power and self-confidence of older women.
Author's Response:
Cougars don't mess around, -and know what they're doing. Much better than being at the mercy of some 20-something who can't keep her potted plants alive let alone a tiny human.
Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2023 4:59 AM Title: An introduction
My ideal relationship between a woman and a shrunken man places her desires and needs explicitly above his. She needn't abuse him, and I prefer it when she takes his needs into consideration, but there's no question that she's in charge. "Pet with benefits" is what I'm looking for, and you delivered that exquisitely. That Laura is older and more experienced is extra special. She knows what she wants and she takes it. Fulfilling her needs is all I could ever want.
Author's Response:
"Pet with benefits"
That's great, might use that one day.
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2023 4:48 PM Title: An introduction
Do you plan on continuing this story? The beginning was quite good
Author's Response:
Yess, but at my own pace. Kinda just write a chapter whenever the mood hits.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2023 3:26 AM Title: The first night
Such an amazing story so far! And wow, Laura is hot! I would have accepted that offer in a heartbeat! Being taken care of and used as a sex toy? Sign me up.
Also, the dialogue is amazing! You managed to capture the naughty experienced woman vibe very well. If you didn’t even mention her age, I could’ve guessed it based on how she talks to Taylor.
Also, I love how she is horny and seems to be bridging the gentle/crazy line very well. I can’t label her and that’s good. She flirts with both sides and it makes the story unpredictable which is awesome.
In addition, some of the little details are hot too. That little dating profile of her was so fun to read especially since she was clear on what she wanted. Nothing better than a horny milf that knows what she wants.
Lastly the part about her mentioning that she could take him to work was hot too. If she slips him in her panties or maybe ties him up to the crotch of her panties, man that is just heaven.
Anyway, I love the story so far and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like her, tried to skirt that line of consent which size-content so often tramples over entirely. It's fun to write.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2023 3:53 AM Title: An introduction
Awesome start! Definitely looking forward to where you take this
Author's Response:
<3
[Report This]Date: August 09 2023 12:11 AM Title: The first night
I'm looking forward to the next
Author's Response:
<3
Date: August 07 2023 8:36 PM Title: The first night
Real great start! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
<3
[Report This]Date: August 07 2023 1:03 PM Title: An introduction
Great establishing chapter here, you've done nice work at setting up the world and characters so far.
Can't wait to read more and see how it plays out, this is an interesting setup and I can see it leading to tons of kinky/size fun with Laura.
Also you did a good job showing the vast changes/backstory of Taylor and the consequences of him shrinking.
Sucks about his girlfriend and job, but the idea of the government making these programs (and then restricting who gets the full benefits based on 'liveable' size seems like such a real thing that would happen in some countries more than others, and lead to hardships)
and the teen coming over to work as a handler was a nice touch. Could totally see an apathetic teen doing it for a paychek only and not giving two shits about him.
Author's Response:
Not me sneaking social commentary into fetish smut.
Wanted his 'choice' to go with Laura to be somewhat understandable considering his situation, making him all the more conflicted about what he's got to endure.