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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2023 7:20 AM Title: Let’s Get It Started

Great chapter. While I do wish some of the paragraphs were split up into a bit smaller ones, that is a personal preference. The description is on point and really a strong suit, and I’m excited to see where this may be going.



Author's Response:

Thank you, apologies for the big blocks of text as you have seen with my writing, they tend to become mini POV stories onto themselves skewing from the longer narrative or lack thereof. But I will do my best to keep things on track as the story goes off the rails.

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