[Report This]Date: October 23 2023 5:54 AM Title: Mind Playing Tricks on Me
Great story man. Been enjoying the buildup throughout the chapters, definitely in my favorites of stories.
My only critique however with the buildup is that at some parts, i personally think it’s a bit too long, And it somewhat disrupts the pacing of the story and i wanna read more of the meat and bones of the ebony giantess’ actions and the consequences of her arousal, though its great to see that stuff picking up from this chapter. I hope to read more, and seeing what happened so far from this chapter, I’m guessing it’s gonna be more intense from here on out.
But Overall, this has really great writing and I’m enjoying the story, rlly sexy things going on, definitely would love to read more with feet crushing and how her lust brings about the city and its people.
i see you got other stories, and ik you’ll prob release those in order, i hope to see this story continued/fleshed out/ & completed.