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Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2023 12:28 PM Title: Ch 3. Tropical Storm

Processed nutrient bricks?  I thought I was reading survival romance, not survival horror! *shiver*

Thanks for bringing us another solid chapter.  This was a good glimpse into the pasts for the MC's.  It got a bit heavy there, but the best way to unburden the weight of the past is to share the load.  Excellent use of the storm as emphasis.  I'm looking forward to seeing Miriam tease out more of Lanz's past.  And the opposite as well, but Lanz definitely has some serious secrets.  Thanks again!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I like the term "survival romance," makes it sound so dire. Like, your trapped in Silent Hill and a bunch of cute monster girls based on your past traumas are trying to date you lol.

It's funny, I thought up the storm for the opening scene because I thought it'd be hot if they were exercising in the rain, but as I was thinking about where I wanted to go with this chapter, I realized "Wait, I can use this to serve the narrative too!" 

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