[Report This]Date: September 01 2023 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept of a world where literally everything is edible. It was an amusing enough read to peruse. The one thing I ponder at the end: Does she magically shrink back down to her original size once her binge is over and she's no longer constantly hungry? I was a little confused at the end as to whether or not she stays as a nude giantess standing several hundreds or thousands of feet tall at the end of the story. She would certainly have a LOT of explaining to do before her sister when she returned home if that ended up being the case.
Aside from that confusing concern, it was a neat little one-shot.
Author's Response:
She shrunk back down to normal. I had a line or two that implied it but you just made me realize I never said it outright. Thanks — fixed!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2023 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Clever premise and well-executed. Growth from gorging makes for a satisfying read, and you nailed the descriptions of both the food and the growth/destruction. And I liked how everything came together at the conclusion. Great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! This was a blast to write and it definitely won’t be the last time I explore growth by eating.