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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 29 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2 | Role Reversal

Ok, what happens next?

Yes, it's confusing making sense of make believe species; but your story flows naturally enough that both sides can be made out as either bad or good.

Will be interesting to see how this battle proceeds, especially since Lark is supposed to end up in Askura's panty according to your story description.

Reviewer: Kanmusu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2023 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 2 | Role Reversal

This is a very cute story that I've come to enjoy more than I expected I would. It's a nice mixture of lewd and romance, with dialogue charming enough to keep a smile on my face.

Keep it up. I'm excited to see where this story goes if you're planning for a series longer than 3 chapters, especially with the worldbuilding potential. It's been great.

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