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Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2023 11:36 PM Title: Chloe’s Kiss of Death

Very interesting and has a great path for future story plot. Hoping to see where this can go and how poor Ella's story progresses. What will Riley feel if she finds out what happened to Chloe. There is still a lot of potential to this story. 



Author's Response:

I love the feedback, I’m glad you enjoyed it! After this chapter the story probably won’t last too much longer, but I could potentially something with it again in the future.

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