Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Bloody Step Forward.

So far I am enjoying the story quite a bit.   One thing that I have noticed in your writing is that you often incorrectly use the past tense of the word cast as casted.    The past tense of cast is actually just cast.

I love that local artisans cast their sculptures in bronze

https://grammarist.com/usage/casted/#:~:text=What%20Is%20the%20Past%20Tense,is%20actually%20just%20%E2%80%9Ccast.%E2%80%9D