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Reviewer: klinza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2023 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 a long way down from here

damn gutted to hear its all been deleted from one f**king button! i did not know that was a thing. but maybe you could have it as a book someone else is reading about when you rerelease it  as it looks like they are screwed and the person reading comes looking for them. personally I would go with the messenger from the village as they left before the mansion collapsed it, the diver who he saved before, adult belladonna. or the sharks bane could swallow the room if she travels to the deep places. If she did Jose would be reunited with his toucan finally and the sharks bane could go back to living normally. why has black ice not called Camille to help? anyway I'm asking a lot of questions the important thing is your m health gets better because if it goes it may not come back!       

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