Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 6 / John & Hannah

This is prob my favorite chapter so far. Finally getting to the plot related stuff and conflicts. 
Seems John and Mike gonna have a rivalry, tho what’s interesting is that Mike doesn’t seem like a bad guy, just a guy who was shy af and now gained some confidence to finally talk to the girl he likes. 
Hopefully he stays that way, could be an interesting dynamic rather than the generic “bad dickish dude steals the girl” trope. 
Looking forward to next chapter!

Reviewer: SamNorton Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 / Ms. Donovan & Dave

Nice first chapters describing the first growing episodes around the campus

I liked that the growth is random, that not all the people in the chapter are growing, like in this one that only Ms donovan is becoming a huge muscular amazon.

Loved that the people are becoming taller and also more muscular

It will be possible to know the heights of the newly grown characters?

Congrats, can't wait to see the next chapters :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! I was planning on releasing a few chapters depicting the growth of the characters as introduced them and figured this would be a good way to do it. 

Yes, I liked the idea of having not everyone grow but those who do becoming vastly more powerful than those who stayed the same. 

I actually meant to leave tags at the ends of the chapters to say how big everyone had gotten, but I’ve went back and added them now.  

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2023 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 / John & Hannah

Nice intro. Curious to see where things go from here. By the sounds of the commotion outside the bathroom, it would appear that several of the other students and faculty are going through something similar to what the two lovebirds just experienced. It'll be interesting to see how things develop, assuming you continue this story...