[Report This]Date: February 13 2024 10:51 AM Title: The monster of the Lost Valley
I thoroughly enjoyed Vivettas story that you inspired from, it’s got great action pieces but also lore and minor characters to feel for when unpleasant things happen to them. Ahem.
You are up to a fantastic start if I may say so myself. Not because you are taking an interesting concept and rewriting it but it is more how you write in you own way. You seem to have adapted Vivettas story to fit your style and it is pleasant to read to say the least.
I don’t usually write reviews but when I feel like I have to I will.
I’ll be looking forward to more to come. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Why thank you, far too kind!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2024 2:17 PM Title: The opening Gambit
Wohoo!! Another chapter uploaded, how phenomenal your descriptions remain to be! I’m also appreciative of the background of the Elven society, the lore! Establishing the other characters and their hierarchy. I cant wait to see what Yesha gets up to next chapter. The wait is surely worth it! I love your writing style very much, I hope to see more stories from you in the future and the completion of this one!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope I can keep delivering ahah!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2024 1:23 PM Title: The monster of the Lost Valley
I’m loving this story so far. Your writing style is very immersive, would love to see her grow some more. Compare herself to the civilizations, very excited to see more chapters if you do them! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am working on more! I have a few more chapters already planned and in the oven. And yes, our "heroine" will indeed grow more.