Reviewer: Socalspeck Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2024 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love lilli-brobi interaction, love micro stories. The smaller the better! 

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! 

Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2024 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Story immediately caught my interest with this premise. I LOVE to see Swiftverse tales (Gulliver's Travels) and this one has all the makings of an excellent one.

Your use of descriptive language to paint the scene of what was happening was on point. I love you using the POV of the tiny people to get a sense, not just of scale but the devastation being wrought, and I hope to see that continue as the story progresses.And the worldbuilding introduction to set things up had just enough detail to let you know what was going on.

Also, double plus on having an auburn giantess instead of a blond one! XD

All in all, a solid start and I can't wait to see how Ava's journey in this small new world will progress. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words! Glad you liked the story so far. 

I am also looking forward to telling more of Ava's adventures in Lilliput. And will make sure to label as Swiftverse going forward (although I kind of think Gulliverse rolls off the tongue as well :-))