Date: February 25 2024 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Really interesting take on the genre. Lilliputians so advanced, they teleport their civilization to another realm or secretive location. I saw 'Concordia City' and I had to do the Leonardo DiCaprio pointing meme when I read it, lol.
Author's Response:
Ha, always glad for an audience that gets it
[Report This]Date: February 25 2024 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very nice! Clear and solid worldbuilding in just a few paragraphs then straight to action, with vivid descriptions of the massive size of giantess and the impacts of each of her subtle movements. Most importantly, the personality of Ava seems very likeable from a reader’s perspective: confident and mischievous, which could usually lead to some intriguing scenes as she interacting with the tinies, if you know what I mean, haha!
Definitely look forward to seeing how the story goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Ava is a fun character to write, even when seen from other perspectives. Will definitely be more interaction going forward.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2024 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is getting really interesting and omg the description of details is great and I hope you explore this world more in other stories after this.
So far I love Ava character
overall great chapter and story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I also enjoy this world, so definitely has potential for more exploration!