[Report This]Date: May 03 2024 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my goodness! I'm so sorry I didn't leave this when you first posted this chapter! I've been thinking about this review all week! D'X
Before anything else, please note: do not fear! Even if you don't see a review from me, know that I'm ALWAYS looking out for and ALWAYS reading this story. You captured me with your initial premise and did not fail to deliver on it! XD
All I can say for this chapter is: fantastic. Just beautiful in every regard. You nailed all the imagery to illustrate scale, the descriptions were wonderful, the point of view was captivating, you did a absolutely amazing job!
I loved Ava Chapman. Absolutely great giantess, loved her interactions, her scale, the miscommunication aspect of everything (the poor Lillies! DX ) and extra bonus points for her being a redhead and having white toenails! Superb! ;P I love me some a good redhead!
And the perspectives? EXCELLENT way to humanize the poor unfortunate tiny people in Ava's way. Not only did you have perspectives from the Lilliputians but to have multiple perspectives all of different state of mind and reaction was wonderful!
I'm sad to see this story seems to be at it's end. Really would have liked to see more from ol' Ava.
Only negative for me so far is the little trip abroad. It kind of killed the momentum for me and felt more like a distraction. That being said even then you didn't slack on your descriptive language to paint the events as they happened so still, kudos there!
Overall, great stuff, can't wait to see more from this story and absolutely will be looking out for what you make in the future! ;D
[Report This]Date: April 22 2024 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
It's been a while and I’m really glad to see the story keeps going!
Actually, I find it is quite funny that in Chapter 5 the girl managed to precisely crushed the lower half of that guy despite their extreme size difference, just remind me of the phrase “Fuck this guy in particular”.
The latest chapter is action-packed and I absolutely love it. The destruction scenes are simply top-notch and some of the best I have ever seen!
There is another sudden transition at the end, similar to Chapter 4 where the Lillis passengers somehow got teleported and leading up to the unaware scene. Is the cause behind all these incidents ever going to be revealed? I think the story is already very enjoyable but I just want to know it out of curiosity. Now that Ava has had her fun and it seems the suffering of Lilliputians is close to its conclusion, or maybe it is just the start of something even bigger?