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Reviewer: Mbs216 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

It was perfect. Wish we could get more- it’s a fun premise for having someone who could keep getting mistaken for a bug



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Reviewer: Tiny_T3 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

Great first chapter!! Looking forward to the rest. 


Would also love to see this story in reverse, have the insect loving roommate shrink down and have the model try to smash her under her shoe thinking shes a bug. 



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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

awesome start. can't wait for more.



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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

Definitely looking forward to more.



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Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

Great start!!   loving it!    Keep up the great work!    An idea, Anita mistakes McKayla as a specimen and she puts her in an insect box for a presentation without realizing it.   



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