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Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 - So much for a plan....

Short little fun story. Great premise, your descriptive imagery and illustrations of scale and danger were on point. Sad it was short but a good read nonetheless.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I’ve got a bunch of shorter stories in development! 

Reviewer: Gunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2024 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - So much for a plan....

Pretty good, was hoping her roommate would drop her into one of the terrariums, really put her skills as an entomologist to the test. Could be interesting with different chapters being different terrariums, though I can't imagine anything but bad endings for most of them.


Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2024 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 - So much for a plan....

Good story!    Wish though that Anita would have put her roommate in a separate cage. Then the story could have gone on.  But good Tory though.  

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