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Reviewer: aswann12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 1:56 AM Title: Before the show

Absolutely loving this so far!


If you take suggestions for future chapters I can see a challenge with a giant male contestant, where the small group would have to take off his cock ring, but with a twist:


Every couple minutes they have to shrink down further and then continue, with the goal being to take it off before they get so small that they'd have a high chance of getting trapped/crushed in between his cock and the ring.

Reviewer: Outlaw761 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2024 1:12 AM Title: Before the show

Amazing start to the story dude. Great pacing and setting the scene with the information about the entertainment industry managing to use shrinking tech to do shows like this. Also something I don't think gets mentioned enough is how organic your dialogue always feels. Jeff and Andrew's interation especially feels very realistic and incredibly easy to picture.


Awesome work as usual.

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