Reviews For Clone Mayhem
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Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2024 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter. I hope you'll spend some time discussing the POV of a tiny Chase on the pizza as she eats it. Maybe contrasting one who gets chewed up with one who gets swallowed whole.


Now that Delaney knows he is suffering, she should get Alexis in on it. Alexis could be unaware that Delaney has dropped a tiny Chase in her food or her shoe, or Alexis could be convinced to try out tiny Chase insoles and find that they're amazing. Either way, he will have trouble looking his wife in the eye once she has unknowingly crushed him a few times.


Still would be great to see her sit on one of these guys too, maybe as some cushioning on her desk chair.

Reviewer: Gru66ySto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2024 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

Really great, as always. Thrilled to see what D cooks up now that she knows he’ll eventually experience it all in a way. I can envision him opting to become her slave, under the condition that she stops using and killing the clones. 

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