Reviews For World Shattered
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Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2024 6:41 PM Title: The Diagnosis

Really enjoying this story, and I'm especialy excited to see more feet and humiliation stuff in Chase's future.

Would be super humiliating for a member of his own family to see that and potentially join in, but even a friend seeing/participating would be great.

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 4:34 PM Title: The Diagnosis

I like your writing. My criticism is that you maybe spreading things thin with multiple stories going on at once. I'd love to see some dedication to one at a time. But that's me, and like I said you're writing is on point

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 2:58 PM Title: The Diagnosis

Very nice start. Excited for more 

Reviewer: Translucity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 2:36 PM Title: The Diagnosis

Very good writing! Eager to see the continuation of it!

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