Date: August 02 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story, Pixis! You've got a real grasp of the Arthurian mythology, and I love the way you keep interweaving elements of the original story into your narrative.
Also, Cecino was a lucky, lucky man ;-)
Author's Response: I'm not sure he would agree with you on that. ;) Thanks again for reading. Glad you enjoyed the Arthurian stuff.
Date: March 25 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading, and can honestly say it was amazing. I like both your League stories, but this one was better imho.
Author's Response: Thanks. I agree actually. I was pleased how this one turned out. Got to really indulge my love of fantasy and literature along with the fetish elements.
Date: March 22 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Part of Merlin's statement is reminiscent of what the ancient Greeks believed. That the future is preordained and, thus, as unalterable as the past. But, if time is a river, then its flow CAN be diverted "for good or for ill."
In other words? To paraphrase the first two "Terminator" movies, the future is NOT pre-set. And, what might happen can ONLY happen if we fatalistically allow it.
Sorry, if I got a little over-preachy towards the end, there. But, I tend to get that way when I pig out on too much food-for-thought. ;-)
Thanks for sharing this latest masterpiece with us.
Doesn't sound too preachy. I was just surprised to see such a serious, pun-free (or pun-light at least) review from you, Cary. ;)
Thanks for your thoughts. I think I should have explored some of these "predestination vs. choice" ideas a bit more in this chapter. May do a revision eventually.
Date: February 13 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is shaping up to be an incredible story. Great start. Can't wait to read what happens next. My only thing that I wish you would add is that nimue would have purple colored toenails. Or have one of the tinies paint them for her. But other than that lol. Great story.
Author's Response: Purple, huh? That's a very...specific thing to want to see. But thanks for reading. Glad you're enjoying it.