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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 2:25 PM Title: Arctic's Antics

I have mixed feelings about your story. It's alright even if some bits are rather random.



Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Could you elaborate on what you found random about it?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2011 1:44 PM Title: Arctic's Antics

completely forgot about this tale.. im gonna have to refresh my memory of this story.. lol
anyways... i liked her playfulness at first with kevin, but what took me by surprize was her cruelty towards her brothers.. but i loved how kevin had these 'thoughts' of compairing arctic's feet with keyaira


aaron
ps great to see this story again..

Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Yeah I forget about this tale often, hence the sporadic updates :) . And I can see how her actions could take you by surprise, she's actually based on an ex of mine who was particularly exceptive of the uh....more malicious side of my (well our) fetish.

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