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Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Both of you are doing a great job. I always seemed to like stories with drama between mismatched characters. Reads "very smoothly." I'm interested to see what happens next.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

mission nothing... this story just got interesting. well done. waiting for chapter 5. this has been a very impressive adventure story, keep it up.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

trouble brewing...
onto chapter 4...

aaron

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Date: April 27 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

great start! i cant even fathom what is going to happen next, and that is precisely what will make this a very intertaining and enjoyable read.
ps both chapters went together perfectly, looking forward to the next installment of this tale

aaron

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