Date: May 23 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love the foot part! You need to put more like this!
Author's Response:
There will be more foot scenes, definately.
Date: April 12 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
chapters 7 and 8 are really great
Author's Response:
Those are my favorites too thus far, although i have some great moments int he outline uphead that i hope translate well to paper.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am absolutely loving this story!! I'm always checking back for more! It flows so well, and the details are just enough to be able to put yourself in all of the characters positions. I literally cannot wait for more!! :o lol.
Great work! Keep it coming!!
Author's Response: I'm working on hard characterizations to try to maintain them to be accurate and consistent. I'm glad you are enjoying my meager story.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is becoming a fantastic read, i can't wait for more !!
Author's Response: Thanks PinkFemale
[Report This]Date: June 30 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
what a completely demoralizing and humiliating event for the two parents. especially samantha... cant help but feel extremely sorry for her. wonder if steven will give in to his daughter? will kathherine see the error of her ways only time will tell. great chapter cant wait for next installment.
aaron
Author's Response: I tried to work in the emotions they were feeling as I think that really is what makes the entire thing so humiliating that you can see directly how the characters are reacting to the situation. You can see how what is being done pains them on many levels.