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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

this story as a whole has greatly exceeded any and all expectations i have had for it, well done. i really dont know where to begin with the review...

aaron?

ugh... cant think of a thing... sorry

Author's Response: Left you speechless, huh? Well, I guess that's a good thing.

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 7

These chapters are just getting better and better! I can hardly wait to find out what happens next! (Don't worry about the delay, I'm a slow riter myself, lol)

btw I think Morvydd might be my new favourite character.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow what a cliffhanger... an the story was magnificent, especially the magic battles that were pretty cool.
glad that morvydd didnt double cross the league an the scenes with her an the league were astounding an kinda sexy...

this is probably the best chapter in my opinion to this great story.
cant wait to see this climactic conclusion to this tale

aaron

ps you write faster than me with writers block an a broken pinky, lol.
well done, pixis

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

You see? I'm so frustrated with his thick-headedness, I can't even spell "Oh, brother!" properly.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 19 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

On, brother! If only Arthur's wits were still as sharp as Excalibur's blade.

Author's Response: There's a reason for his behavior. More on that next time.

Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

Another brilliant chapter, this is turning into quite an epic adventure. And it looks like there's lots more to come, too.

PS: I would have chosen 'the bosom' too, if I were in that situation :-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow... what stunner for an ending.
loved how the morvydd character acted towards tom. an lol i think that i would like being morvydd's pet, as well.

aaron
hope you DONT rush it with a broken finger, the story can wait.
ps is madam mim the witch from 'the sword and the stone'?

Author's Response: Yes, she is. That movie is based on a story by T.H. White. The Disney version is definitely influencing my take on her though.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Methinks Thumbelina is the one who'll have green eyes, when Tom repeats this conversation to the League. Lol!

Great new addition, Sir P. Maybe you and Malaka should collaborate in the near-future.

Author's Response: I do like Malaka's stories. But I've tried collaborations in the past and haven't been crazy about them. Styles don't always match and real life schedules make them difficult to coordinate. I liked how the stories turned out for the most part but the process was occasionally frustrating.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2010 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is DEFINITELY getting good.

:-D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

i think i speak for everyone when i say i welcome the fact that its going to be a longer story. this is turning out to be the adventure i hoped that it would be, thanks for posting it.

aaron

ps the vore scene was actually 'necessary' and it flowed nicely but am glad that 'lina's ok aside from being covered in goo.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

damn what a chapter. im not even gonna guess whats gonna happen next because im always wrong, lol.

kept me guessing, great dialog too

aaron

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Astonishing! I am amazed at how you manage to incorporate all these legendary figures into a story that is very much your own. Love this, can't wait for more!

PS - I meant to do a similar thing with my fantasy story, before I decided it would be a lot easier to make everything up :-)



Author's Response: Do tell! What characters were you originally planning to use? Drop me a line some time, I'd love to hear about that.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow guinevere has a half-sister.
what on earth could the league ever do to thwart the sisterhoods evil schemes... unless they enlist the help of a favorite character of mine nimue... but ill have to wait and hope.
the ending scene was very sad and yet strangely uplifting
well done pixis for yet another stellar chapter

aaron

ps but one thing kinda bothers me... and that is if guinevak is so identical to guinevere than why did she need love potion?

Author's Response: Extra security, in case she made a mistake and gave herself away. Plus, there's that missing birthmark on her back, which one of her two lovers would have noticed eventually, unless their brains were addled by love potion.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2010 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

I hope this won't be jinxing anything. But, I've a feeling this installment will be more suspenseful than the first two put together!

:-D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

ooh... plot twists galore... nice and entertaining read(as well as the sex scene) ;P
that means it can only be one woman... which is none other than... Morgan?!

hope im not wrong 8D

pleasurable read as always pixis

aaron

Author's Response: Only one woman? You'd think so. But I may have another surprise for you (there is a hint earlier in the story. I wonder if anyone has spotted it). Anyhow, thanks as always for reading, Aaron.

Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing opening, glad to see you're continuing this story. I hope that Nimue does indeed turn out to be good, but we'll see...

PS I also think this type of story is much sexier than most "hardcore sex" stories. Giantesses that have complete personalities are much more appealing than ones that just act on the fantasies of the author.



Author's Response: I completely agree. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great opener! I look forward to the rest. :-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome. You've started writing this story again. Always secretly hoped that nimue would somehow become in charge of the 'league'... While her and thumbling would become an 'item'... Lol guess I can dream, eh?

These characters are awesome, the dynamic between them is impeccable. You write the fantasy/adventure story so well.
Maybe its just me but, are your chapters usually longer than this(no offense just wondering)?

Aaron
Ps are you planing on writing a sequel to Rowena? I'd love to read more about her and Cedric.
Well anyways, can't wait for the next stellar chapter.
Peace

Author's Response:

Thanks. My chapters kind of vary in length. There is more written but for the sake of pacing, this seemed like a good place to break for now.

Nimue in charge of the League? That depends on whether she can be trusted or not. ;)

A sequel to Rowena? I have done two. Did you mean another sequel? We'll see.

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