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Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Astonishing! I am amazed at how you manage to incorporate all these legendary figures into a story that is very much your own. Love this, can't wait for more!

PS - I meant to do a similar thing with my fantasy story, before I decided it would be a lot easier to make everything up :-)



Author's Response: Do tell! What characters were you originally planning to use? Drop me a line some time, I'd love to hear about that.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow guinevere has a half-sister.
what on earth could the league ever do to thwart the sisterhoods evil schemes... unless they enlist the help of a favorite character of mine nimue... but ill have to wait and hope.
the ending scene was very sad and yet strangely uplifting
well done pixis for yet another stellar chapter

aaron

ps but one thing kinda bothers me... and that is if guinevak is so identical to guinevere than why did she need love potion?

Author's Response: Extra security, in case she made a mistake and gave herself away. Plus, there's that missing birthmark on her back, which one of her two lovers would have noticed eventually, unless their brains were addled by love potion.

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