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Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

Another brilliant chapter, this is turning into quite an epic adventure. And it looks like there's lots more to come, too.

PS: I would have chosen 'the bosom' too, if I were in that situation :-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow... what stunner for an ending.
loved how the morvydd character acted towards tom. an lol i think that i would like being morvydd's pet, as well.

aaron
hope you DONT rush it with a broken finger, the story can wait.
ps is madam mim the witch from 'the sword and the stone'?

Author's Response: Yes, she is. That movie is based on a story by T.H. White. The Disney version is definitely influencing my take on her though.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Methinks Thumbelina is the one who'll have green eyes, when Tom repeats this conversation to the League. Lol!

Great new addition, Sir P. Maybe you and Malaka should collaborate in the near-future.

Author's Response: I do like Malaka's stories. But I've tried collaborations in the past and haven't been crazy about them. Styles don't always match and real life schedules make them difficult to coordinate. I liked how the stories turned out for the most part but the process was occasionally frustrating.

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