Date: October 17 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Fantastic story. I especially like the way Lucy and Livia's relationship is slowly and carefully established. Very well written. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoy it! I'll try to post the next cahpter as soon as possible :)
[Report This]Date: October 16 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
just throwin' this out there, but this story kinda reminds me of the movie 'pan's labyrinth'. i mean not the exact story verbatim, obviously. but it's really 'similar'. an thats just my opinion, you understand.
anyways, ill keep this short an sweet. i loved the last id say 7 paragraphs. this is getting really interesting. i just cannot for the life of me figure out the gordon(uncle) and edward(cousin). i, right now, wish they'd just die... but that wouldnt make for a very compelling story. an still aunt(forgothername) intrigues me...
aaron
Author's Response: Interesting...I'd never even thought of the similarities, but I see them now. I love Pan's Labyrinth (wish it had a happier ending, though), but the setting for my story is really more based on the stories of Enid Blyton ( I read them all when I was little). But, yes, both my story and Pan's Labyrinth deal with a lonely girl, with an abusive family, who befriends a magical being...just a coincidence I guess ;p