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Reviewer: Chozo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 Elizabeth's Friend Shawntae

"High cheeks bones and large dimples were the size of a hummer."

 Just want to mention that high cheek bones are a trait of Caucasians and Asians, so since Shawntae is black that would be inaccurate.

Great story though. Sorry to nitpick.



Author's Response: Not exactly, my sister's black and got noticeable cheek bones but hey thanks and its no prob.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3 Elizabeth's Friend Shawntae

cant wait to see where it goes. hopefully some insertion

Author's Response: Maybe. I'm sure we'll have a little bit of everything.

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