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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

love the direction and the humor this story possess. quite different. an enjoyable. only hope that andy doesnt get burned by jessica...

cant wait for more.
aaron
ps the 'sports car' part is kinda unrealistic, you shouldve added the smell of the exhaust or the thundering roar of the massive engine...
eventhough andy doesnt 'know' cars, he can hear an smell...
(takes a deep breath)

Author's Response: Sorry, but I'm pretty bad at describing things that aren't giantess-related, lol.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hmmm I reckon she will take advantage of him. I noticed he hasn't explained his situation to her. Having no friends and all that. I think doing that could affect the way she treats him.

Author's Response: Good guess! =)

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