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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

lol. didnt see this coming either. you are really switching it up. an it couldnt make for a better story.

aaron
only 'complaint' was that the foot scene was too short, so what? hope we meet her tall sister as well.

Author's Response: Well, my taste for feet scenes is pretty limited, lol. Also, her sister will definitely be appearing later. I'm still confused by the shyamalan reference, though... =)

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