Reviews For Ah Melanie Gold
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Reviewer: flospring Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Like to read more chapters

Reviewer: Sharkman66 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

Itwould been nice to c u write sum more to this  i liked itn suremany others as well  just dont feel like writing a review 

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

nice story

Reviewer: Parrot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

I cant tell if the poster below just made a mistake in how many stars he gave the story, or if he actually disliked it.  If it's the latter...boy learn to give constructive crticism.  If it's due to the subject matter (i.e. incest)...learn to read the tags before perusing a story.  Good again

Reviewer: monstermaker Signed star [Report This]
Date: February 02 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Woah. Just wow. Hmm... Is it done yet? I presume not.....

Reviewer: monstermaker Signed star [Report This]
Date: February 02 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Woah. Just wow. Hmm... Is it done yet? I presume not.....

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well done!
Quite an original story.
Needs a little more description of little Phil's experiences.
Looking forward to the next chapters.

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