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Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

No sweat. An his womanizing is fun to read too. Lol. At any rate can't wait to read what you have in store for us. On a side note have you seen the Camelot series on starz(I think)

Author's Response:

I've seen the first few episodes. Seemed pretty good. A few variations but it was fairly true to the story.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh. Well the samurai guy is bad ass an I can't wait to see his back story.

Author's Response:

You'll definitely see some of Issun's backstory. Hope you enjoy it. Sorry about not using Hop. If I had these stories to do over, I probably would have included him from the beginning. He's fun to write.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

great story as usual. an very informative. im very intrigued by this time period. love how playful the women seem to get when ever tom is around. cant wait to see what happens in chapter 2.

aaron
glad to see that you are doing a prequel to your awesome series.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Not sure how accurate to the time period I am. I try to include some historical elements but at the end of the day, this is very much an idealized, fantasy-version of the 6th century. But hey, that's how I like it. ;)

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd been hoping you'd write something like this again, and now I'm hooked. My favourite kind of story, can't wait to read more.

PS Will you be writing a chapter about each of the homunculi's backstory?



Author's Response:

Depends on what you mean by backstory. If you mean the original stories they're from, I'll briefly recap the important bits in the dialogue, but won't be retelling them in full. If you mean how each of them was recruited to the team, then yes.

Reviewer: AzureJass Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

The lack of Vore dissapoints me but it's a good read nonetheless :D



Author's Response:

Er...thanks? Not sure if there will be vore in this one. Mouthplay for sure.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey-hey! Welcome home, Sir P. I was beginning to think those slave-drivers at AC Comics had shang-haied you back for good ("...he joked, half-seriously").

It might be an over-used cliche' to say that the opening chapter of this prequel more than makes up for lost time. But, I regard it as indisputably true, none-the-less. :-)

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