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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 CANNONBALL!

Your standard of writing is good, and I did enjoy this chapter, though you should remember to put speech on separate lines to the description.

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