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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

The story seems never ending. I wonder what's happening the otherside of the portal.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm sorry, but I'm still confused. The reporter called it America... so... could you please fill in the blanks for me? It's just really hard to wrap my head around.

Author's Response:

Good call. When I started this story I intended to make it a completely foreign/alien land/world on which she was trodding in, but this slipped by me. I'll probably edit it later, in the meantime, assume he meant "Hello, nation." :)

 

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