[Report This]Date: February 13 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
You should wright another.
Date: September 22 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
This chapter is a big turn-on!
Date: July 06 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Cute story. Another step in Lucy's sexual awakening and adjustment to the fairy world. I too am craving a more plot-driven sequel though. I hope you do get around to a third story some day.
Question: How is this last chapter not GTS? The shrunken guy in Livia's cleavage probably would have begged to differ!
Author's Response:
Good point! I suppose what I meant to say was that this chapter wasn't in the same semi-erotic tone as the previous ones. But you're right, there are definitely GTS scenes in it.
I've begun to write a long story just now (my own version of Gulliver's Travels) which may take quite a while, but I'll return to this series after it's done.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
i liked the stroy but i was expecting some epic adventure, given your track record so far, it almost feels incomplete. keep in mind though it was not a disapointment in many respects. any way i would like to ask you to read my latest story and tell me what you think if you havent allready. sincerly Supernatural
Author's Response:
Well, I suppose I do always leave room for a sequel, but it'll be some way off, for now. And I wanted to do a shorter story again, for a change.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
nice ending; the lack of extensive gts content is of course forgiveable because it was a satisfying story conclusion. seriously, bud... PLEASE do a 3rd one more in line with the adventurey style of the first one.
Author's Response:
Hey, don't worry, I'll get around to writing a 3rd one eventually. But it won't be my next story, since I like to vary my style from one story to the next. Also, I write extremely slowly, so don't expect a 3rd one soon...but it'll happen, I promise! ;-)
[Report This]Date: June 24 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
no no the sex scene makes scence here, just me myself could spin a tread from it. what i ment was alot of ppl like to write these stories just because they wanted sex. when that happens the story collapses onto it's self and turns into crap. nah this part is a good opening.
it leads to the question, will livia like this new frisky lucy or will the rug be pulled out from under them.or know that his experiment works now will livia's friend use it to kidnap (fairy napped) lucy. only time will tell right?
p.s. sorry if i get too preachy, some time i get carried away
supernatural
Author's Response:
Thanks for the explanation, though I sorta knew what you meant in your last review. You're absolutely right, of course: if you just want some sex scenes, you might as well watch a porn film ;-) Thanks for the great reviews!
Date: June 22 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
i'm so glad to see this one back, but i hope that the sex scene doesnt become a pit fall like it does to too many authors. finally it seem lucy is "cuming" out of her shell, lets see if it's a good thing or a bad thing...
Author's Response:
Well, I don't usually like writing sex scenes, but I felt like this story needed one, lol. Hope it works, though, but you can tell me what you think when the story has reached a finish.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great new story! Very sexy! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm finally finished with exams, so the next chapter shouldn't be long now.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
In response to your last reply on my comment, a longer 3rd story with another more major conflict would be really cool. I would particularly love seeing lucy become large again, those scenes in the first story were easily my favorite of their interactions
Date: June 17 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice to see these characters again. Interesting to see Lucy as the tiny one this time. Very sexy so far. Anxious to see where it's going.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope it'll live up to expectations! =)
[Report This]Date: June 17 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
there's a pleasant sense of calm and casualness going on here, meaning i don't have that terrible feeling of dread that normally looms when things are going really well for characters in stories like this. i'm not sure whether or not you plan to introduce a more major conflict into this story, but i honestly don't think i'd mind if you did or not, providing the story doesn't become a novel, because this is quite nice where it is.
Author's Response:
This story is just about this one night, so no major conflict this time. But maybe I'll write a longer, more epic story with these characters afterwards, since there are so many possibilities. Either way, I prefer pleasant stories over terrifying ones!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey, great to see your name pop up on here. an i loved these characters before an now this story seems better than ever. well done. cant wait to see where you take things next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron! Always great to hear from you!