[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
i liked the stroy but i was expecting some epic adventure, given your track record so far, it almost feels incomplete. keep in mind though it was not a disapointment in many respects. any way i would like to ask you to read my latest story and tell me what you think if you havent allready. sincerly Supernatural
Author's Response:
Well, I suppose I do always leave room for a sequel, but it'll be some way off, for now. And I wanted to do a shorter story again, for a change.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
no no the sex scene makes scence here, just me myself could spin a tread from it. what i ment was alot of ppl like to write these stories just because they wanted sex. when that happens the story collapses onto it's self and turns into crap. nah this part is a good opening.
it leads to the question, will livia like this new frisky lucy or will the rug be pulled out from under them.or know that his experiment works now will livia's friend use it to kidnap (fairy napped) lucy. only time will tell right?
p.s. sorry if i get too preachy, some time i get carried away
supernatural
Author's Response:
Thanks for the explanation, though I sorta knew what you meant in your last review. You're absolutely right, of course: if you just want some sex scenes, you might as well watch a porn film ;-) Thanks for the great reviews!
Date: June 22 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
i'm so glad to see this one back, but i hope that the sex scene doesnt become a pit fall like it does to too many authors. finally it seem lucy is "cuming" out of her shell, lets see if it's a good thing or a bad thing...
Author's Response:
Well, I don't usually like writing sex scenes, but I felt like this story needed one, lol. Hope it works, though, but you can tell me what you think when the story has reached a finish.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
In response to your last reply on my comment, a longer 3rd story with another more major conflict would be really cool. I would particularly love seeing lucy become large again, those scenes in the first story were easily my favorite of their interactions
[Report This]Date: June 14 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey, great to see your name pop up on here. an i loved these characters before an now this story seems better than ever. well done. cant wait to see where you take things next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron! Always great to hear from you!