[Report This]Date: June 16 2011 1:21 AM Title: Deceptive Wanderings
I love everything about this story. It's descriptive, well-paced and well-written. I am also a champion of anyone who writes the unaware/micro stories that are not too prevelent on this site. Keep up the great work, I'll be tuning in often to see if this story is updated.
Author's Response:
Us micro fans have to stick together. Check out my other stuff, too! I'll be adding a lot, we gotta boost the micro and voyeur community!
Date: June 15 2011 9:26 PM Title: Deceptive Wanderings
In a mere half hour you've not only convinced me to review my first item on this site, but have captivated my attention more quickly than most other stories that have been posted in the past YEARS. Maybe it's a lack of a REASON for shrinking... Maybe it's because you're also giving a unique perspective on the genre. Hell, I don't know but a freaking nose narrative? Marvelous.
Author's Response:
I guess I don't do much intro sort of work because...well, the majority of the readership of this website is looking for action, mostly, not plot. Don't get me wrong, I love plot, but I just find very little use for character development and back story, when most people will skip forward anyway. Thanks for making me your first review, it's an honor! Hope you continue to read, review, and rate(with 5 stars please. :) )