Great erotic story. Well described and with a great tense build-up. Would have been great if it ended with chapter 3 (for the vore fetishists), but chapter 4 was great from the other perspective. It would have been interesting to see what she would have done if Carl had simply given up and not fought to survive. Would she have gone through with digesting him? I think, probably so.

I'm likely your work more and more, especially the "A Little Blackmail" series. Especially recently.

This was very different from that in terms of the "giantess" character, and I think it was really terrific! I applaud your decision to flesh it out and give it a last chapter. I think that makes the doctor, and the plot, much more interesting, and makes the story a true pleasure to read. I'll admit, I'm a bit inspired, and that's not generally what I go to this site for.

You have my thanks.

You made vore interesting for me, something that I thought was impossible. I enjoyed this short story; it packs a hard, mean punch in only a few chapters. I think you're gifted at developing the dee sense of dread and psycholotical crumbling of your main characters, as they face, if not utter doom, the disintegration of their self-worth.  Here's to hoping that Carly tires of her brother in the third installment and horrifyingly ends him!