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Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Good story. But at the end of chapter 7 you went from I to you perspective.

 

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Pretty good. But I'm waiting to see some action before i give a rating.

Dave

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Heh! I have a nephew who will be two years-old, next spring. And, I have a feeling he'll only be half the trouble for his parents that a 17 year-old daughter might be!

;-)

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