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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Friday and Samantha

If she talked to her own mother like that, Amanda would no doubt take the Bill Cosby approach and show her whose name is on the bills each month.

Whereupon, Samantha would then--equally doutlessly--shrink her!

Reviewer: ArtimusG Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Friday and Samantha

Lots of potential here!  I enjoy the plot building, but I hope to see you incorporate some of the themes you added in the next chapter.  I'll give you a rating then. :)

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